Advanced ✍️ Writing · #93 of 98

Writing a Personal Statement

Show motivation, achievements and goals in a unique voice.

Examples

  • My passion for science began when...

Key rules

  • A personal statement shows your motivation, relevant achievements and goals in a distinctive voice
  • Use concrete examples rather than general claims
  • Keep the focus on what you have done and learned

Common mistakes

  • I am very passionate and hardworking and I love science. → My interest in science began when I designed a water filter for a school project, which taught me how to test and refine an idea.

Use cases

  • University applications
  • Scholarship applications
  • Graduate school admissions
💡 Tip: Show, do not claim: give one clear example for each quality you name.

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